Joe,
Anyone can follow the rules of 2/3rds, have the tonality perfect and so forth. That's technical. However, breaking the rules uses them to turn things on their head. You picture is otherwise well done. If you print it large and in fact emphasize the eye, then it will be perceived as having some allegorical meaning to be interpeted in the line of the body piercing (ie mutilation). Just an idea to think about.
Yes it's opportunistic, but hey, you might be able to exploit that!
Remember "You can't be a whore unless you're willing to let your pants down", an Asherism!
Asher
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