OK, so I had my first outing with my Super Speed graphic and I think my images came out rather sucky.

Equipment:

Super Speed Graphic
Original Optar 135mm lens
Film: Fuji Provia 100

Environment:

Very sunny day
Light clouds







These were originally shot in color but the look better in B&W. can anyone look at these and have a suggestion on how to improve? Maybe a better lens?

Thanks as always.... Joe.