Thanks guys. It's actually been a couple years since I've shot any large format.

As per the focus: she couldn't stand dead-still, the tripod was wobbly, I knocked the camera when loading the holder, the lens is way shallow at f/2.8, and I was shooting with a spare darkslide as shutter! I'll brace her next time.

Scott, nice shot. Get him to lean forward a little and shoot from slightly further above him aiming down.