Industry

[routlaw]

Excellent work matto!

Rob

[viablex1]

thanks Mang

[Laron]

some shots around kleinhuningen in Basel:

kleinhuningen_3 by Aron Lorincz, on Flickr


kleinhuningen_2 by Aron Lorincz, on Flickr


kleinhuningen by Aron Lorincz, on Flickr



kleinhuningen1.jpg by Aron Lorincz, on Flickr

[jon.oman]

Laron, You are posting some great images!

[Sean Galbraith]

Lovely shots!


Larger: http://www.seangalbraith.com/photobl...nsylvania.html

I'm not sure about the scan of this one (actually, 2 4x5 negs stitched in PS). Can't put my finger on it... but something is off. Critiques welcome.

[Leigh]

Hi Sean,

To my eye there's a problem with the upper part of the picture, partly discordant composition and partly geometric distortion from the wide-angle lens. The latter is most obvious in the mis-shapen lamp housing at upper left.

I would crop off the top below the gantry crane and the light, leaving a wider aspect ratio that would make it seem brighter and more airy.

Just a suggestion.

- Leigh

[Sean Galbraith]

Thanks, Leigh.


4x5 Fuji Astia

[Anton Nordfeldt]

Thanks, Leigh.

*Image*
4x5 Fuji Astia

That's a good one. Is it bethlehem steel works? I'm not in front of a calibrated monitor, but I would like to get a stronger feeling of the sunlight. Maybe increase the overall saturaton a bit and also brighten the steels highlights and midtones with a linear curve, lifted by its highlights.

I had a look on your web page where I recognized some of your work, and I must say that it is inspiring.

[Frank Petronio]

No offense to anyone but the distortion from the wide angle lenses is really pretty amazing and ruinous to me. Anyone figure out a better strategy for dealing with it? (Stitching, Photoshop adjustments, or calling it art?)

[Sean Galbraith]

That's a good one. Is it bethlehem steel works? I'm not in front of a calibrated monitor, but I would like to get a stronger feeling of the sunlight. Maybe increase the overall saturaton a bit and also brighten the steels highlights and midtones with a linear curve, lifted by its highlights.

I had a look on your web page where I recognized some of your work, and I must say that it is inspiring.

Thank you very much.

I'll give those suggestions a try, thanks.

It is a closed steel mill in eastern Ohio.