Tri,
I regret to report, we have had a terrible spring! The weather here is totally upside down the last few years.
Miguel suggested:
"Sweet color "palette", good balance backround/subject, (maybe push away white wall or column to further to the right...)"
Forgive me please if you already are aware and have done this, but if I may?
Have you tried to burn that section down a little to see how it looks?
My father (who was a photographer then later an editor) and my old CP editor use to turn prints upside down and glance at them for a second or two only to break the brains "corrective" powers!
Quickly note where the eye went in the first split second and adjust if needed.
Beautiful picture, very soothing tones, perfect balance of "swirl" and soft focus. Maybe burning the area will ruin it, but it may be worth a try during a future darkroom session just to see.
Please forgive me if I have overstepped my boundaries with your picture. I like the image very much.
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