I think most of my problem is development, hence posting in this forum.
Maybe the first three pictures I took with my DIY 4X5 camera were cases of beginner's luck, because the next four have some problems. First, the negatives seem very flat to me, and processing in Lightroom doesn't help much. I assume the problem is either exposure or in development or both. Most troubling is the dark triangle in the corner of three of the four--not the same corner in all three, however. The last picture has some vignetting, but I expect that's because I was trying movements beyond what the lens could cover (Fujinon 135mm f/5.6). The dark triangle on this last picture is also the opposite corner from all the others, making me think it isn't a problem with camera or film holders.
The details:
Exposures for 1-3 were between 1/15-1/60, at f/16. Number four was 1/15 at f/22. Film FP4+ 125 ISO, metered at 100 ISO. I realize I may need a set of colored filters to get better results.
Developed taco style in window screen sleeves, in Patterson two reel tank (using equipment I already had). Xtol 1+0, continuous agitation by inversions for first minute, 5 inversions at beginning of each following minutes for total of 7:30. Film may have been skewed in taco sleeves, and there might not have been quite enough developer to cover--perhaps that caused the dark triangles?
My film-loading, handling, and developing practices definitely needs work, given the dust and other glitches. FWIW, I checked out copies of The Negative and Beyond The Zone System from the library today.
Here's the images, unprocessed after scanning (Epson V700, with minor curve corrections):
Picture 1:
Picture 2:
Picture 3:
Picture 4:
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