Originally Posted by
tgtaylor
Norman Mailer would probably say: "Ink don't dance!"
Speaking of writers, I see some excellent poetry here.
Really, all it takes is a few well-chosen line breaks.
Not only is the suspense gripping, but the clever dance metaphor – kept alive in the third stanza w/ "changing partners" – is quite entertaining. At poem's end, I think the "light of platinum" is impressive imagery indeed, and a satisfying resolution too. Great job, Thomas.
Dance of the Molecules
I coat a sheet of paper
With a solution of ammonium chloride
And wait for it dry
Then onto the sheet
I coat a solution of silver nitrate
And also wait for it to dry
An amazing thing then takes place
And the components of the two solutions
Change partners
For the two solutions
Now become silver chloride
And ammonium nitrate
But I'm not done yet!
Before fixing I “tone” the print in platinum
And the silver now becomes platinum!
And the color of the light
Reflecting from the print's surface
Is the light of platinum!
Can the inks do that?
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