That's great. Has an ethereal, almost storybookish quality to it.
That's great. Has an ethereal, almost storybookish quality to it.
New to LF. Crown Graphic 4x5. This is a sun set Lake shot, Tobyhanna, Pa.
Here is another, New York from the Jersey side. All recent since I have only taken 20 shots with Provia(Lake) Astia(NY) film.
Critiques are fine.
Anthony
They are sometimes hard to come by in here though...Originally Posted by I4YM
to give you critiques on your images, they have to move me enough to unslack and click on "reply" first. Then, since I don't want to post only "great capture" style of stuff, I have to think about properly formulating whatever I want to say :-)
I liked those two pictures. I think they have a nice quiet quality to them, a simplicity. They didn't strike me so much that I wanted to give you a feedback if you hadn't asked for it though.
The second one, the city in the distance with the clouds, has some otherworldly feeling about it. But there is something that's missing for me in the framing... if it was my picture I would be telling myself again about my tendency to try to get it "all in one picture" at the cost of not getting a real good composition. But that might be just my problem, maybe what bothers me is something totally different really :-)
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Fantastic shot Ed! Where from was thi staken if you don't mind me asking?
-Leon
Its from the picnic area just past the little league field in Elysian Park. You're looking at the west side of the Dodger Stadium parking lot with the stadium itself just out of the frame to the left.
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