Rory: Great image. Thanks for showing it.
Rory: Great image. Thanks for showing it.
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Critique please and thanks
Graflex Crown Graphic w/ 135 mm 4.7 Optar lens
Kodak Ektar 100
Naubinway, Michigan
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I like the composition generally...with the three strong lines converging towards the left horizon.
I'm a bit distracted by the crooked horizon line, and also I would possibly like to see the close end of the log included in the image, with just a bit of "breathing room" between this and the bottom of the frame.
Also...the far end of the log looks like a dragon's head - and it would be interesting to have taken another image featuring this detail more prominently.
Colors and contrast are believable and softly relaxing - but as always it would be nice to see this as a physical print.
Agree with this.
I would also add that there appears to be not enough DoF in the foreground, so perhaps a tilt adjustment was called for here?
In addition I think the composition would have benefitted from a higher camera position with some front fall/rear rise to get the driftwood in. That way the fore-, mid- and background would be better balanced in terms of scale and impact.
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