Really like both images brother Jim but I'm crazy for the light/colors of the second. Nice work!
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Jim, great images of Factory Butte. The first one at sunrise is strongest for me.
Thanks, Roger. Looks like you're in Atlanta-if you're also on Facebook, there's a group of local LF photographers in the North Georgia Large Format Photographers group-check us out. We do meet ups about once a month, and welcome new members and ideas for locations.
Updated image of Grand Canyon Toroweep September 2018. Shot with Chamonix 45H-1, 90mm Schneider Super Angulon f/5.6@f/32 on Portra 160. Scanned with Epson V850 as linear raw tiff, converted with Colorperfect and processed in Photoshop. This is the unsharpened version.
I am still on the fence with cropping down further to remove the white sky on the upper right. When I look at it cropped that much it seems cramped. Thoughts?
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Very beautiful, Steven! I like the bright spot of sky upper right; it balances the lighter area on the rocks in the image center.
I find the upper right very distracting. I suggest you try burning in to decrease the brightness in that area.
Magnificent view! I would keep the bright sky - it "shows me" where the light falling on the red rock face is coming from and it balances the image, which would otherwise be dark & rather murky. The dark vs. light interaction is like classical Chinese cooking (so I've read): it thrives on contrasts & "contradictions" like sweet/sour, or smooth/crunchy, etc. in the same dish (those slippery mushroom pieces are often put in the mix to provide a contrasting texture).
In your image, not only do we have the sky/rock-canyon contrast, but within the sky itself we have texture-cloudy on the left and breaking-light on the right.--alfredian
That is stunning Steven! Put me down for a "keep the bright sky" vote.