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Upper Young Lake, Yosemite National Park
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Tachihara 4x5, Caltar II-N 150mm f/5.6 (I think), Fuji Provia 100F
Going back a couple years, it was really a couple prints from Charles Cramer at Young Lakes that ultimately persuaded me to even try Large Format. Getting up there in July was a real treat for me.
Eddie,Quote:
Originally Posted by eddie
The shots are ordered in sequence.
Because of the altitude here, we often get a very visible band of purple/magenta in the sky on the fringe of the earth's shadow. The mountain peak is at 13,950 feet, while I'm at about 12,400 feet. On this particular morning, the magenta cast seemed rather strong to me and there were some clouds catching that light and bouncing it into the scene in front and behind me. But this was shot on color neg, and to me its always a somewhat abstract process of interpretation.
Oh man that is some sweet light and a beautiful location. The only thing I would do is crop out that bright patch on the top right.Quote:
Originally Posted by MumbleyJoe
I went back and forth on that myself. I ended up keeping it in the frame as I felt it gave a bit more context to the area, but can also see it being a distraction. Thanks for the feedback.
I agree with you as well. It gives some context to the location. Great work!Quote:
Originally Posted by MumbleyJoe
Joe, It's a great scene, but cropping and values can be your best friend. As you've already determined, your real subject here is the light. Just a suggestion, but enhancing that light by discarding what isn't "the light" and printing it much deeper to reveal the light bursting from the shadows may give you much more satisfaction.
Only my opinion, but from the scene, I think this reveals your real image...and a gorgeous one it is. Beautiful place and a wonderful image.
The problem with crop is, if you are looking for a "grand" landscape style of photograph, the crop destroys that. That's fine, if that is your vision. I personally prefer the grand landscape. However, I would make that area a bit darker.Quote:
Originally Posted by lenser
Well, I appreciate the depth of consideration from both of you (sincerely), I normally have a hard time getting anyone to engage beyond "Yay" or "Nay" level of discourse. :)
I have generally gone in the direction of the "grand landscape", particularly with Large Format, but have recently been trying to edit down and become more focused on singular or simpler elements of the scene. As such, the "to crop" or "not to crop" lies somewhat at the crossroads of that decision. When I cropped it last night (with my wife's input as well, which is nice as she was there when the photo was taken) we both preferred the more "open" view, despite my general move away from the broader landscape. That could also be our personal bias, as its a sort of souvenir of our backpacking trip as well as a stand-alone photograph, so the broader context means more to me. I essentially never tolerate blown-out skies either (part of the practical rationale for tighter framing is simply to keep the exposure within the narrow confines of slide-film exposure latitude). As it is, I like that the light is still somewhat 'soft' and 'subtle' here - as the sunset progressed it got more dramatic.
Anyhow, I'll leave it at that, as I don't want to imbue this with more importance that it warrants. Thanks for the feedback!
Hi Don,Quote:
Originally Posted by D. Bryant
Thanks for the comment :)
I do vascillate over this manner of presentation. But seeing as I decided to present the images this way on my website, its easier to just link to those images using [IMG] tags. Apologies if its distracting. I trust you still derived a *little* enjoyment from my images... :)
Regards
Hope you don't mind if I setup in your tripod holes in about 3 weeks :DQuote:
Originally Posted by seabird