Large Format Landscapes

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Originally Posted by John Layton

I like the composition generally...with the three strong lines converging towards the left horizon.

I'm a bit distracted by the crooked horizon line, and also I would possibly like to see the close end of the log included in the image, with just a bit of "breathing room" between this and the bottom of the frame.

Also...the far end of the log looks like a dragon's head - and it would be interesting to have taken another image featuring this detail more prominently.

Colors and contrast are believable and softly relaxing - but as always it would be nice to see this as a physical print.

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Agree with this.

I would also add that there appears to be not enough DoF in the foreground, so perhaps a tilt adjustment was called for here?

In addition I think the composition would have benefitted from a higher camera position with some front fall/rear rise to get the driftwood in. That way the fore-, mid- and background would be better balanced in terms of scale and impact.

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Originally Posted by eepskamp

Critique please and thanks
Graflex Crown Graphic w/ 135 mm 4.7 Optar lens
Kodak Ektar 100
Naubinway, Michigan
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There's a color cast that has to be removed. Here's my try at it.

Lake Superior shoreline in Michigan's Keweenaw Peninsula.

Toyo 45AII, Funjinon 90mm, 1/15s at f32, Delta 100.

https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...1f69ff13_c.jpg

Lake Superior Shoreline by Kevin Pihlaja, on Flickr

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Spring - Gunnerside - Swaledale - UK

5x4 + HP5 + ID11 (1+1)
MG Cooltone RC + MG Dev

Martin

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Evening - Lock Etive - Scotland

5x4 + HP5 + ID11 (1+1)
MG Cooltone + MG Dev

Martin

Kodak TMAX 100 4x5, HC-110

https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...602724dc_o.jpgOak Trees on Hill by Jingmin Zhou, on Flickr

2 pics from mountain trip.
Linhof MT

Fomapan 200
FomadonR09

https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...353615e3_b.jpg0314_4x5 by Vladimir Borisov, on Flickr

Fomapan 200
Pyrocat HDC
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...69e74e4d_b.jpg0313_4x5 by Vladimir Borisov, on Flickr

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Originally Posted by 4erepazzi

2 pics from mountain trip.
Linhof MT

Fomapan 200
FomadonR09

https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...353615e3_b.jpg0314_4x5 by Vladimir Borisov, on Flickr

Fomapan 200
Pyrocat HDC
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...69e74e4d_b.jpg0313_4x5 by Vladimir Borisov, on Flickr

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These are great.
Really like the hints of the mountains behind through the mist/snow.
Martin

Very fine work, Vladimir!

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Originally Posted by Ulophot

Very fine work, Vladimir!

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Originally Posted by Martin Aislabie

These are great.
Really like the hints of the mountains behind through the mist/snow.
Martin

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Thank you!