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Spent a few days at Jekyll Island with the 4x5. Maco 820 ir r72 filter, f16@15 sec
Re: Your Best Photograph from the Previous Month - Critique and Discussion Encouraged
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Steven Ruttenberg
Here is an image from Grand Canyon North this year. It is kinda emotional for me as are all of my Grand Canyon shots this year as i had been given a layoff notice just before I went. So it was hard to keep my head on straight standing on the edge of a 1000 foot drop off. But for the brief time waiting for the light to be right, etc, I was at peace but haunted at night with the possibility of losing everything and not being able to provide for my family and 7 year old son.
4x5 using a Chamonix 45H-1, 75mm Nikkor f/4.5@f/32 on Portra160. I have my thoughts on the image, but waiting to hear. I need to find a better way to post images. flicker and zenfolio seem to over saturate color images on upload.
Checkout the fuzzy rainbow on the far rim image center.
https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/...f1f41076_k.jpg
Hang in their Steven. A door closed because another door needs to be opened for you. I have gone through this cycle four times in my career and retrospectively I was in a similar state of what I call artifically imposed desperation each time. Yet I was thankful for each displacement because it caused me to do a hard boot and kick things back in gear. As a result I just celebrated my 20th year of being in business for myself and I would have never contemplated this possibility unless I got kicked hard by a series of qualified idiots along the way. Photography can be an excellent venue for managing the obvious stress and I am glad you went ahead and took the trip. Circle the wagons and regroup with the family.
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Thank you all. I hope to never go thru it again and if I do, I hope to handle it better.
Re: Your Best Photograph from the Previous Month - Critique and Discussion Encouraged
Steven, it's a good photo. On my monitor, the yellow cliffs look a little unnatural, and the sky is a bit blah. Try cropping off the top of the image to just below the yellow cliffs. For me, that focuses interest on the valley.
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Thanks for posting such nice images. I like your Grand Canyon photo composition just the way it is. I agree with Peter De Smidt though, about the unnatural colors, but I think the web can be unforgiving with color rendition. I find it tedious to make even B & W images look like they should on the web.
Hang in there on the employment situation.
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Dawn!
I have problems with the darkness, lacks your usual detail, but could be my dim eyes
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Ken, I think the yellow cliffs could come down another 1/3 to 1/2 stop and foreground up by about the same amount. But then the screen tends to be a “lowest common denominator” device in critical viewing.
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Yes, our monitors make the final difference. I made that edit on my calibrated iMac at home. On my non-calibrated Windows machines at work the image looks rather different :rolleyes:
My basic point - made many times by others - is that sometimes we get preoccupied with technical issues like dynamic range and resolution and overlook the fundamentals.
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