Images FOR CRITIQUE

[Gary Tarbert]

Hi Christopher , Great idea for a thread , Although i don't submit a lot to the image forums , It is interesting when you submit something and get nothing but praise it is great , But when you submit something and there is no comment either positive or otherwise , I just assume no one liked it ,But i have no idea why? I hope to see this section flourish i will put one of my no comment ones up tonight when i get home . Cheers Gary

[Gary Tarbert]

Here it is Shen hao 5x4 150mm lens velvia 50 ,
Cheers Gary

[thomasfallon]

Very nice. I'd just burn down the top right. It competes with the water.

Here it is Shen hao 5x4 150mm lens velvia 50 ,
Cheers Gary

[C. D. Keth]

Very nice. I'd just burn down the top right. It competes with the water.

I concur with that, perhaps in combination with dodging up the foreground water flows.

[Gary Tarbert]

Thanks Thomas & Christopher, Those corrections are and have been made on the print version ,For the web i only reduce the non sharpened versions as when you reduce print version it tends to oversharpen them so the tonal corrections are not done on this version ,If i was asking for critique probably should have ,BTW a 40inch version of this sold for $850 aud only last month . Cheers Gary

[cosmicexplosion]

Christopher I have looked at your images
To me it they are too hard and simple.
That is a style of abstraction I know and only from my inner camera.
But some times a photo can have a sound
And this one is of a loud clang of steel.

[cosmicexplosion]

One of my first 108's to look like a photograph.
Dagor 360 Kodak 2d
Ill ford 125
Bout half second
Image from digital take from RC print.
So pretty low quality version
But the image is still there.

[C. D. Keth]

A new one I'd love thoughts on:


Architectural Abstract 6; 2013 by CKeth, on Flickr

[Leigh]

Hi Chris,

You have a practiced eye for geometry and contrast.
Excellent composition and tonality. Very well done.

A triviality... I would have taken the bright triangle up to its apex, presuming such existed.

- Leigh

[mdm]

It looks like a wall with light and shadow, rather than an abstraction of wall, light and shadow.