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    Violin

    I have just started shooting LF and this is my first violin photo with my CC-400 4x5. The movements make it easier to get the "look" what ever that is. I am exploring the new possibilities.
    CC-400 4x5, Schneider 90mm f/5.6, FP4, HC-110 1+50 9 min.

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    Re: Violin

    You're off to a great start. I think the shadow at the bottom is a bit too heavy as it obscures what is obviously a beautiful instrument—a little more delicate touch with the lighting would accentuate its sensuous curves. I look forward to seeing more!
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    I like your photograph very much as it is. Rather than a clinical rendering of the entire instrument, your photograph depicts the violin's form emerging into the light.

    Nicely seen!

    -Mick

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    Re: Violin

    I agree with Richard that the shadow at the bottom is too dark. And I think I would have preferred to see the other side of the violin.

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    Re: Violin

    The lines and texture are stunning. Do you have any more shots of the violin? I'd like to see where you go with it from there.

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    Re: Violin

    I wish I was as good as you when I first started, keep up the good work and shoot a lot

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    Re: Violin

    Not bad Barry!

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    Re: Violin

    Quote Originally Posted by Louie Powell View Post
    I think I would have preferred to see the other side of the violin.
    The back is interesting. No law says you must only show the strings side.

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    Re: Violin

    This is a really good start! Good use of lighting and shadows. From what I observe, the shadow is unavoidable when using a single light source or no reflector. The only thing I would suggest is pull the light back a bit. The grain in the highlights is washed out a bit.

    The violin looks as if it is floating, which I think is rather nice.

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    Re: Violin

    The violin is still under construction so there is no neck or strings on it yet. Mick was on the right track, it is emerging,
    Thanks for the encouragement.

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