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    Critique

    Hey guys, just curious to see what you all think about some of my work. Any feedback would be great. Thanks
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    Re: Critique

    some more
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    Re: Critique

    I really like portrait and the one of the creek the best, care to share your setup?
    "WOW! Now thats a big camera. By the way, how many megapixels is that thing?"

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    Re: Critique

    Very good. I like very much quality of printing (resulted tonalities). Are you following “Zone system?
    Instead I do not understand the unfocused legs in the portrait. Are these volunteered; why?
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    Re: Critique

    I think the look you achieved in the Creek photo is wonderful and unusual, with such a remarkable transition from fully sharp to an extremely soft focused surround. Is the lens in the portrait the same? That too I think is a great looking result. I too am very curious to learn more of your setup and how you achieved such special images.
    Any more??
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    Those two pictures would be very appropriate to view in the "Galli Style" thread and would add to the thread content nicely.

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    Re: Critique

    one possible variation
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    Re: Critique

    Quote Originally Posted by Ken Lee View Post
    one possible variation
    I have a version printed almost like this that has been toned in selenium with ilford warmtone paper.

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    Re: Critique

    For my setup, I use a zone VI 8x10 with a rodenstock 240mm lens. I do follow the zone system, as I'm still learning. Currently a student in photography. Thank you for the feedback everyone

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    Re: Critique

    Quote Originally Posted by la.triglia View Post
    Very good. I like very much quality of printing (resulted tonalities). Are you following ôZone system?
    Instead I do not understand the unfocused legs in the portrait. Are these volunteered; why?
    There is no specific reason that the legs are out of focus, mostly due because I did not have enough light to stop down any more given my already slow shutter speed. I probably could have tried to correct this with the front standard, but I'm content with my results.

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