Hi everyone,
I feel like pepeguitarra, but I also dare to post basically my first photograph made with a 4x5 Sinar F2.
I am still not clear if I should crop it a bit to eliminate the plug and the switches on the left or what else I could improve.
Hoping for some tipps and tricks, critics and comments.
Cheers, Miguel
Simon_Portrait_Sinar_2 by Miguel Buschhauer, on Flickr
Miguel,
I'm not bothered by the switches, but I think you should crop out the branches at the far left. I don't think you want to crop the plugs at the bottom, you would loose too much of Simon. If you reshoot, maybe you can rearrange things to hide the plugs.
I like the "environmental" aspect of the portrait, but maybe he's too far into the bottom corner of the photo. Maybe...
Thanks a lot Mike for the feedback and recommendations. I fully agree to all your points. More to come in the near future where I can try to follow your points.
I absolutely love my Cooke 3.5 lens...
This is a cropped version made on photographic paper.. (13x18cm)
Very beautiful Emil. I love the light so subtle and the soft expression of the model.
A few development issues, but this was shot yesterday. In the style of Dali.
Chamonix 4x5, 216mm doublet f3.5, Ilford Pan 400.
trip2017010236 by Vance, on Flickr
Nice
Like it
Royh
From a trip with the camera club
Fomapan 200 in Xtol.
Gandolfi 8x10
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Self portrait
Calumet 45N, Schneider 210mm f/5.6, HP5+
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